Today I got to read some awesome
stories and learn more about some of my classmates. After reading Jacobs story
about his Jersey I learned we had more in common about each other than I knew.
I thought Mariah’s story was awesome! Shes is awesome at describing scenery so
that you feel like you are actually there. In Meghans story it reminded me a
lot of 1984 or one of those futuristic satires. It was fun to read!
Hey Jacob,
Great story its something I can relate to as well. I still
have all my hockey jerseys even though I haven't played in like 4 years, but
its nice to have them around. I thought the ham through a tube sock metaphor it
was a real hoot. Good Luck this season.
Dan
Wow Mariah!
loved the story! I felt like I was actually there. The
ending was great too it all tied together. Keep writing youve got a gift!
Dan
Hey Meghan!
I liked how you twisted the golden rule into something bad.
It made for an awesome story and was very unique! You should write more stories
I think you've knack for it! Best Wishes
Dan the man
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