The man got out of his bed and put on his dark green robe,
brushed his teeth, and slid on his watch. The robe had been a present from his
wife a few years before and it had had muddied stripes down the sides as to
make the whole robe look like the rows of a vineyard. He slowly creaked his way
down the carpeted stairs and reached his front door. The man turned his wrist
to check his watch. The paper should be in the yard by now he thought to
himself. Opening the door he met a biting breeze that smelled of the pines
surrounding his house. Quickly now he strode across the stiffened grass. Each
one of his steps crunching into the ground as if he was walking on fresh salad.
The sun rose up over the distant horizon and set the rocks
on fire. The once cold brown faces of the huge cliffs quickly became a
scorching orange that seemed to blaze as a second son on the surface of the
Earth. Soon the desert floors colors began to appear more vividly and it seemed
like the surface of the barren planet mars.


I like the description of the crunch of the frozen grass as like "walking on fresh salad." And I like your connection of the desert colors to the planet Mars. Are you going to go see the new movie The Martian? It looks really good.
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